u asked for critique for this deviation, so i try my best for comment on this.. in coloring the objects such as the couple and the dinosaur its perfect! ( lot of better than me ), might be for the sky and the smoke, i think theres a less for dimension there, for me maybe i'll add some soft cloud for the sky, or maybe another shadows on the smoke
and u need to know that,i write this, not because i better than u. i write this for got some feedback for my work , if its not bother of course
Thank you. I am tweaking the sky a bit. I'll see what I can do about the smoke.
I wouldn't feel comfortable critiquing your work because you already have more skill than I. I can't really draw. Sorry.